Wednesday, October 21, 2009




Guide to Writing a Project Report

The following notes provide a guideline to report writing, and more generally
to  writing  a  scientific  article.     Please  take  the  time  to  read  them  carefully. Even if your project did not go as well as you had hoped, there is no reason why you should not score a high mark for you report if you are prepared to work at it.


PROJECT   REPORTS......................................................................... 1

1.       WHY    REPORT?.................................................................................................... 2

2.       WHAT  LEVEL? ....................................................................................................... 2

3.       HOW MUCH DETAIL TO INCLUDE? ...................................................................... 2

4.       THE  NUTS  AND  BOLTS. .........................................................................................2

5.       FORMAT   OF   REPORTS........................................................................................... 2

5.1.         FIRST PAGE. ...................................................................................................... 3
5.2.         SECOND PAGE. ................................................................................................... 3
The  Abstract. ............................................................................................................. 3
5.3.         THIRD PAGE. ...................................................................................................... 4
5.4.         FOURTH  PAGE  AND  ONWARDS............................................................................... 4
Introduction. ............................................................................................................. 4
Results   and   discussion................................................................................................ 4
Summary   and   conclusion............................................................................................ 4

6.       A WORD ON REFERENCES. ................................................................................... 5

7.       ASSESSMENT   CRITERIA........................................................................................ 6

8.       DOING  THE  REPORT. ............................................................................................ 6

9.       WHILE WRITING AND PLANNING THE REPORT PAY ATTENTION TO THE
FOLLOWING    POINTS:.................................................................................................... 7


1.         Why a report?
The production of a good piece of technical writing for a project report is as much  a  part  of  the  project  as  doing  the  experimental  work.                                               However excellent and original a piece of work the project may be, unless the results can be communicated to other people it may as well not have been done! Communicating results of an investigation in a clear and useful way is a key part of science and is the reason for devoting a lot of effort to this aspect.

2.         What level?
The  main  part  of  the  report  should  be  comprehensible  by  other  stage  3 students. If more detailed information is to be included about some aspects (for instance, a complicated mathematical derivation, of which only the result
is essential to the main discussion) consider including this as an appendix.

3.         How much detail to include?
It is not necessary, or even desirable; to describe every minute detail of what was done. One of the most important aspects of good technical writing is to
be concise, yet remain informative The ability to select what is essential, and to omit what is merely incidental detail, is a skill every scientist needs to develop. In view of this, the main part of your report should be restricted to at most 4000 words. This is an upper limit and not the length that is expected
(a  typical  report  would  be  2000  words).       An  overlong  report  is  liable  to receive a lower mark than it otherwise deserves.


4.         The nuts and bolts.
Two copies of the report need to be submitted Students who have worked
in  pairs  must  write  and  present  independent  reports,  stressing  those aspects of the project for which they were individually responsible.

5.         Format of reports.
Whilst  not  mandatory,  there  are  good  reasons  for  the  usual  format  of  a report.  Sections that you need to include are,

·   Title
·   Authors
·   Abstract
·   Table of contents
·   Introduction
·   Experimental techniques and methods
·   Results  and  discussion
·   Summary/conclusions
·   References
·   Appendices (if used)












5.1.     First Page.

This should contain the title, the author(s) and the date.

Title.

This should convey the area and scope of the project. For example,
Rainbows  is poor is this an investigation of the occurrence of rainbows
in medieval illuminated manuscripts? or their use as metaphors in popular art? Or what?

A better choice might be  Rainbows: the deflection of light by liquid droplets and  the  determination  of  droplet  refractive  index  from  measurements  of rainbow  phenomena

5.2.     Second Page.



The Abstract.

The  second  page  should  consist  only  of  the  abstract.        The  idea  of  the abstract is to provide a brief summary of the report The reader should be able  to  pick  up  from  the  abstract  what  the  abstract  entailed,  how  it  was undertaken and an indication of what was found out.  An abstract should not review the report, but should rather act as a sampler of the contents of the report.  Typically the abstract should be less than 200 words.

A poor example of title and abstract might be,

The length of a piece of wood.

The length of the piece of wood was found to be shorter than it should have been.   We  had  problems  with  our  measuring  device  and  could  not  obtain good results.  With better equipment we could have got better results.

It is poor because,

The length of the piece of wood was found  (how was it measured?) to be shorter (by how much?) than it should (should? say s who?) have been. We had problems (what sort of problems?) with our measuring device and could  not  obtain  good  (whaimeanbgood?)  results.                                                                                                                     With  better equipment we could have got better results (a cop out!).



A better title and abstract might be,

Interferometric measurements of the length of a piece of wood and discrepancies with previous spectroscopic measurements

The  length  of  a  piece  of  wood  was  measured  using  an  interferometric technique.          Our  results  gave  a  length  shorter  by  1.5%  than  that  found  by
Hamel  et  al  [1]  who  used  a  spectroscopic  technique.         However,  our


measurements suffered from a large random error (2%), which we attribute
to  the  use  of  a  lamp  as  the  source  of  light.     An  alternative  interferometric
measuremen strateg employin  lase i suggeste tha should overcome this problem.

[1] Hamel, R. et. al. Physical. Review. K, vol 34, pp 127, 2010


5.3.     Third page.

This should comprise a table  of  contents, indicating the page numbers of the different sections.


5.4.     Fourth page and onwards.



Introduction.


This is where you need to outline the underlying concepts (and if required a brief version of a any theory) needed to discuss the project.



Results and discussion.


Present  your  results  in  a  logical  sequence,  highlighting  what  is  important and how the data you obtained have been analysed to provide the results you discuss.  You should discuss what you infer from the data.  You need to adopt a critical approach For example, discuss the relative confidence you
have  in  different  aspects  of  the  measurements..  A  poor  example   the straight line fit between dog type and owner size gave a slope of 0.3                                              Better would be  the data show a linear dependence between dog type and size of dog  owner,  with  a  slope  of  0.3+/-  0.03.                                                                               However,  there  is  a  noticeable divergence from this linear dependence for small dog types, as can be seen
in the left hand side of figure 8 .

Make sure that all diagrams, graphs etc. are properly labeled and have a captionA  neat  hand  drawn  diagram  is  preferable  to  a  poorly  made computer diagram, or a poor resolution image copied from the web.



Summary and conclusion.


This is the section in which you need to put it all together.  It differs from the abstract in that,

It  should  be  more  informative,  something  that  can  easily  be  accomplished because you may devote more words to it.

You should include a concise version of your discussion, highlighting what you found out, what problems you had, and what might be done in the future


to  remedy  them.     You  should  also  indicate  how  the  investigation  could usefully be continued.

Pages, diagrams, references and tables must all be numbered.

6.         A word on references.

These are very important.  Your report should be sufficient to indicate to the reader  what  you  have  done,  what  you  found  out  AND  provide  enough information  for  them  to  repeat  the  work  if  they  so  wished.                                                                                             You  will  have made us of information from a variety of sources, e.g. the speed of light from
a  book.    In  these  cases  you  must  include  reference  to  such  sources.     It maybe that your project showed no evidence for cold fusion, but this might
be because the value of the specific heat of water you used was incorrect.
By  including  a  reference  to  the  source  others  can  check  your  work  and reduce the time taken to make further advances.

There are generally three types of reference according to the source, journal article, book, and web site.

Book you need to cite title, authors, date published, edition (if not first), City
of publication and publisher. e.g.

Elements of Nuclear Physics  W. E. Burcham, (London) Longman, 1979.

A journal article,

The speed of light by interferometry  A. Dixon, Journal of Light, vol. 3, pp.
123-234, 2003.

A web page,



A word of caution on web based information Journal articles and most books are peer reviewed This means that other workers in the field have checked them for accuracy etc..  This is not true of web sites.  Be careful in
taking  information  from  such  sources  and  if  at  all  possible  verify  the
information  by  checking  in  books  etc.      You  should  also  read  the  web information critically to see that it makes sense to you.  You are a physicist and should take pride in not being duped into making easy mistakes by faulty information.



7.         Assessment criteria.

These  are  used  by  markers  to  assess  your  report.  You  should  look  at  the these before drafting your report . The current version can be accessed from the relevant page in the School Handbook at the bottom of the section on formal reports at:




8.         Doing the report.

I suggest the following plan for writing a report.


1)        Identify the story you wish to tell.  Often this can be simply done by deciding which diagrams and graphs of data you wish to include.

2)        Draw up a plan of what you want to say and how this fits around the diagrams/graphs you want to use.

3)        Extend you plan to an outline that includes all the section headings you will need.

4)        Check through the outline to see that sequence is sensible and that nothing vital has been ignored.

5)        Check your outline through with someone else e.g. fellow student, tutor or demonstrator.

6)        Write a first full draft of the report.

7)        Check the first draft through for consistency, obvious errors and omissions (e.g. figure captions missing? References still to do? If you can get a friend to read through it critically so much the better.

8)        Revise the draft and re-check until satisfied.

9)        Submit report.


9.         While writing and planning the report pay attention to the following points:


A)  Make sure you mention the background to, and aims of, the investigation

B)  Include the basic concepts and theory relating to the investigation.

C)  Describe  the  procedures  used.  Identify  major  sources  of  error  and explain how they were dealt with.

D)  Only  data  directly  relevant  to  the  calculation  of  final  results  should  be presented,  omit  raw  data.                                                     Graphs  are  a  particularly  effective  way  of presenting  results   only  use  table  where  it  would  make  more  sense that providing a graph.

E)  Final  results  should  be  presented  clearly  and  concisely;  include  an analysis of errors, but omit details of arithmetical manipulations.

F)  If  computer  code  was  used  or  written,  give  details  of  the  checks  and validations you performed on the code.

G)  The  interpretation  of  the  results  must  be  discussed,  and  improvements and possible extensions of the work suggested.

H)  Give  references  to  any  books,  articles  or  other  sources  of  information (e.gwesitesthahavproveusefuipreparinthreportor carrying out the work.



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